I still love this game!

I know deep down you know what's going on here and why it's sick as fuck and you have this great build-up of chords, as well as a vocal sample that clicks at the right time. Check the percussion and go back to the drawing board on that, The hats are too intrusive and not in the cut of the main track. That fixed and you have a fucking banger, my dude.

I like the rhythm and flow of this track a lot over all, but I think it could really use a stronger musical backing, the intonation and pitch really doesn't really cut through the mix. I think it is because the bass has so many overtones bleeding through, I can tell what it should be doing but it doesn't quite the land the way it wants to. I think that also may have led to issues with the trancey pluck that comes in from the start and onward, not always feeling the tone.

I gave four stars because of the rhythmic cohesion and overall structure to the track, because I can see a lot of potential in it. But it needs to really find its place musically, and hopefully with that you can find the space to layer in some really strong breakdowns and transitions.

Keep at it friend, this is a solid start.

1:00 to 1:17 is easily my favorite part of the track enough to fall in love with it in a way. Made the section at 2:01 that much more enjoyable for me, love the way you reintroduce what you did earlier. This critique may be more applicable to the genre but I feel like everything has my ears teased for something to really hit in hard. Everything in this track works really well together, and you build off what you set up very well. Still though my ears crave this thing you tease at in all of this.

Awesome work.