If you remove from this it would start to shape up, when you fill your music with something on every rhythm and every possible there is not cohesion or structure outside of the pulsing rhythm. I think if you focused on cutting out several little parts try to find 1 from each instrument on each you can start to build something. I was honestly a little disappointed at the 1:00 minute mark because all be it repetitive you have a nice little mortal kombat esque riff going there. Try to contextualize what you're trying to express to decide what you want to leave in.