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If you remove from this it would start to shape up, when you fill your music with something on every rhythm and every possible there is not cohesion or structure outside of the pulsing rhythm. I think if you focused on cutting out several little parts try to find 1 from each instrument on each you can start to build something. I was honestly a little disappointed at the 1:00 minute mark because all be it repetitive you have a nice little mortal kombat esque riff going there. Try to contextualize what you're trying to express to decide what you want to leave in.

Sounds so slick ,slides so smoothly I'm still stuck singing songs so sweet. Simple souls savor summer sun.

Very pretty, a bit slow and the drums occasionally don't seem to match the context of the music but it shows promise, thanks for sharing. Keep practicing.

It's definitely a JRPG alright! :D Nice job here! I think the bass is a bit too busy on some of the more intense sections. It kinda loses its rhythmic drive. But that is mostly a stylistic choice for a more chaotic style. But I think a steady bassline can build a lot of energy on the high intensity sections and also it builds tension when there's a nice chord build up.

Awesome to be inspired!

Schematist responds:

Thank you for the analysis there Rekuiem! I love when people take the time to breakdown my tracks and share advice. It sounds like you are a fan of JRPG's as well :). I will probably try experimenting with a different bass line in the near future. Thanks a lot!

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